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I suddenly remembered (as a result of returning to the same spot where I was originally walking when I was developing the idea a month or so ago) a massive significant chunk of invented family backstory for de Brencourt that I had managed to completely wipe from my mind while struggling simply to complete the initial set-up scene... which is what I have been doing for the past month. Fortunately I don't think that particular detail is something the Comte talks about with Roland, but rather arises from talking *about* the somewhat awkward question of Roland with Gaston de Trélan, so it fits into the next scene and not this one... but progress overall has been pretty abysmal.

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zero page hits on 'The Remorse of Others' )


notebooks )
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Well, the fanfiction.net stats are back, so I was able to see what I'd been missing out on there... a grand total of nine page views on 'Chick nor Child' since I uploaded it on March 9th :p
Now I have no excuse for not doing any work on Hertha and Arctic Raoul...
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In the course of six days I have had 19 hits on chapter 1 of Perrette, and 3 kudos, and one person has even subscribed to the story -- either in the hopes of more, or in lieu of a bookmark :-p stats )

This chapter, being considerably shorter, was of course exponentially quicker to deal with... (And of course it is entirely concerned with OCs and their preoccupations, which makes it of extreme minority interest so far as fanfiction readers are concerned; at this point it is pretty much straight historical fiction, although the same could be said of Hertha's family worries.)


Ch2 — Glimmers of Goodbyes

The death of the Count de Chagny was always a notable event in the local district, but on this occasion it was a nine-days’-wonder that showed no signs of dying down, even weeks after the news had reached them from Paris. It was years now since old Count Philibert, struck down by a palsy, had taken to his bed and dwindled away, and by all accounts that had been a merciful release, and one long-awaited. It was the death of his wife in childbed, folk said, that had taken all the heart from him... and the Countess Éléonore had been a masterful woman, to be sure, still remembered among the tenantry with equal parts affection and dread.

But not every Count in the past had perished as peacefully — or as blamelessly. Read more... )

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Of course it's always *after* you have uploaded the chapter in three different places, one of them inaccessible, that you notice you used the term 'enlighten on [the matter]' twice in two different contexts in the space of the final paragraph... :-( "Apprise of" will do as a substitute, I think ("inform" isn't quite right, being too direct, and moreover we've had "form" in the preceding clause). "Advise of" would be less obscure, but I feel that unfortunately it risks getting read as Perrette actually offering advice on the matter rather than merely deigning-- or not-- to provide minimal information!

AO3 series )

page-view stats )

I *knew* this was not going to be popular and I wrote it anyway, just as I always do. It would be nice to be popular, but if you're going to insist on being wilfully obscure then you can't expect it.

Meanwhile I have very nearly finished typing the second chapter (another few hundred words to go), which is considerably shorter.

my stats software is definitely broken )
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I'm frankly not sure if Raoul is coming across as a complete idiot for not working out what Perrette is talking about, or if the reader is going to be equally mystified by it — the intention was supposed to be that the reader gets it and Raoul perhaps understandably doesn't :-(


Chick nor Child

Raoul has an encounter with Philippe's past, and Perrette faces the future: side-stories from The Sons of Éléonore".

Ch1 — Strange Meeting

The local diligence was slow, ancient and crowded, the old man next to him smelled strongly of garlic, and the good-looking motherly woman and her daughter sitting together opposite kept exchanging whispered confidences and giggling in a way that made Raoul acutely uncomfortable.

He had, of course, no business to be in the common stagecoach in the first place. His trunks for the Naval Academy at Brest had been strapped up and sent off already, and his brother Count Philippe had been expecting— indeed eager— to drive into the station with him this morning, in one of the family’s own well-appointed, well-sprung vehicles, so that they could make their final goodbyes there on the platform. But Raoul was fifteen now and almost a man, and he had stood upon his dignity and insisted that he could undertake this journey all by himself... and the Count had laughed, embraced him, and let him go.

Read more... )

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I have 2,300 words of Perrette typed, which I reckon to be about half the first chapter; the two halves are going to be distinctly unbalanced, but the second half is long enough to run alone, and the two together are really too much for a one-shot.

I'm running into all sorts of editing problems resulting from having been writing very slowly and hence inconsistently, like the question of whether Philippe was supposed to be letting Raoul make his own way cross-country (implied at the start), or whether he was sending him off with a groom in attendance in order to catch the train (written later, where he arranges to evade his escort and catch the stagecoach in the opposite direction). Read more... )



I'm pretty sure now that *none* of the seedlings that have
come up so far in the chilli pot
are actually chillies, which is reassuring in a way, since they weren't expected to germinate anything like that quickly!
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Having been making good progress on Chapter the-second-and-last of "Chick nor Child" (although finding it rather harder than I had anticipated to include the snatch of dialogue which was supposed to provide the title!), I decided belatedly that I really ought to do some research to corroborate the social structure I had set up, given that I was now supposed to be writing from the peasant farmer point of view (and likely to run into indignant egalitarian Americans, as I discovered when presenting the prevailing employers' view of servants: unreliable, complaining and opinionated, rather than downtrodden slaves!)
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Divided inheritance and Raoul's marriage )
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I'm actually well into my second chapter (or possibly) scene for Chick nor Child, or whatever it's going to be called -- I have very little sense of chapter length in this small fat notebook, but I think the first scene is probably about two and a half thousand words, though it feels longer. In which case I may end up running the two together as separate scenes in a one-shot rather than as individual chapters.

[Edit: apparently my word count was for 100 words per side rather than per page, which means the first chapter is more like 5000 words... which I must say feels more likely! It just shows how the small page width completely throws off my sense of how 'large' a block of manuscript is, though...]
Loose shoe and OCs )
Beta-reader needed? )
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I think I've got a dating problem with my story -- I'd originally envisioned the encounter between Raoul and Agathe taking place at a point when he had wandered off during his sisters' wedding at the end of the summer at Perros-Guirec. But I ended up shifting it to an encounter on the local diligence at the start of his journey back to Perros three years later. Raoul is now stated to be fifteen, which is fine, and makes sense of Perrette's observation that he is a bit naive for his age (mentally comparing him to Philippe, of course, whom she knew when he was a year or so older).

But since Agathe must have been born when Philippe was seventeen-ish (avoiding the gestation lacuna of the TEN LONG YEARS in Love Never Dies!) and Philippe was twenty when Raoul was born, it's going to be quite a push for her to have a eldest daughter of her own who is a visible Chagny by the time of events at the Opera some five/six years later. Read more... )
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Well, I've actually started on the crackfic prompt about Perrette's daughter :-)
And exactly as predicted, it has almost immediately turned from any sort of attempt at humour into a perfectly straight R/C fic, which is what almost invariably happens as soon as you get inside Raoul's head -- apparently the boy simply can't think about anything else! Read more... )
Leather journal )

NB: the bias binding on the neck of my pyjamas has worked beautifully. I have had no further discomfort at all, and my hemming survived the washing machine in perfect condition! Thank goodness for that.

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