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"Waiting for the Out" finished on a high with two unexpected yet earned and credible happy-outcome twists: a series strongly recommended.

Marie Antoinette )

Kit Bellew is now firmly launched (although not yet rechristened 'Smok') on his Yukon adventure in "Smok and Malish" -- though I'm afraid that, as with the Soviet "Twenty Years After", after an initially hopeful start I was able to pick up rather less of the plot in what followed, despite the fact that large chunks of this section are completely dialogue-free, and indeed shot in what amounts to fluid silent-film storytelling technique...Read more... )
As I said, this section consists of a lot of what are effectively silent film sequences with the occasional 'title card' snatch of dialogue, so Smekhov's expressive face is used to convey a lot of his character's thoughts and decision-making, to my benefit; it was the actual conversations I had trouble with!


I was somewhat shocked to gather from the podcast that the composers for "Ali-Baba" apparently didn't get paid for their work; they were classified on the record sleeve as 'dilettanti' ('amateurs'?) due to not being members of the official Composers' Guild, and thus the mere glory of getting their work published and distributed was presumably supposed to be enough! (Smekhov, likewise classified, presumably didn't get paid either due to not being an officially sanctioned 'writer'... but then the project was his idea in the first place. They were just doing the music in their spare time as a favour.)


I am now several chapters into the Russian version of "The Three Musketeers" as bed-time entertainmentRead more... )
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I fell asleep while listening to Smekhov read Chapter 1 of "The Three Musketeers" in Russian (the audiobook is on YouTube), and dreamt first that he was reading an anomalous version of Chapter 27 (La femme d'Athos), thanks to having listened to a heavy metal version of the Soviet film's 'Ballad of Athos' immediately beforehand, and then that he was reading Jack London -- this is what you get for mixing your canons :-D

The Russian audiobook is surprisingly comprehensible, given that I only understand about a quarter of the vocabulary -- it of course helps enormously that I already know the story, and can sometimes recognise bits of it word for word! I have a certain suspicion that the unexpectedly raucous voice Smekhov gives to his young d'Artagnan may be a take-off of his friend Boyarsky, although it's not inappropriate to the young man's exasperated and combative disposition ;-)

(I tried listening to an 'intermediate level' modern educational clip featuring two girls discussing the subject of 'why it is important to keep a diary' very slowly and with illustrative graphics and gestures, and although I could indeed understand every word, it was rather less enjoyable than Dumas grasped at in passing, and -- unsurprisingly -- very much less creative than the 1970s educational programmes, where there was clearly some serious talent enlisted...)
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Apparently I missed doing this altogether in 2024, so I'm afraid "The Remorse of Others" will never get a mention...

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It eventually dawned on me that the mysterious phrase on the bottom of my handwriting worksheets was the Russian equivalent of the infamous quick brown fox that jumps over the lazy dog -- a short sentence that includes all the letters of the [Cyrillic] alphabet :-D

съешь ещё этих мягких французских булок, да выпей чаю

(Eat more of these soft French rolls, and drink tea!)


I *think* I have finished the BBC Musketeers one-shot that I started halfway through December... after struggling with my final line over the dread of how other people's fetishes might choose to sexualise something that very much wasn't intended to be 'shipping' :-(
The BBC characters )
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D'Artagnan at war )

Order in which d'Artagnan's friends leave him )

A whole extra chapter at the end of the French version of 'The Man in the Iron Mask' )


What I was actually trying to do was to ascertain whether it was possible for me to have Venya being asked to play at Mass, in a nod to Nat being asked to play his violin to accompany the Sunday hymns at Plumfield. Read more... )

At any rate, I'm afraid I came to the conclusion that it seemed overall in the highest degree unlikely that homespun musical services would be going on anywhere at Bragelonne in the same spirit as those hosted by the Bhaers at Plumfield, whatever kind of religious observance did exist there (and there must surely have been *something* as part of the settled routine of life at that era?) If any singing went on, it seems more likely to have been by the celebrant[s] and unaccompanied -- and a country priest would probably simply read his daily offices, with or without a congregation to participate.
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I think I have finally almost finished my Athos crack-fic (which, as usual, is of course completely lacking in any crack humour save for the initial bizarre concept, being written entirely straight). I am not particularly happy with it; the balance of the various parts is, I suspect, distorted by how much trouble I was having in writing them respectively, which means that what I thought was the main section, consisting of the introduction and arrival of my OC, is probably now overshadowed by the much longer following sections between the canon characters, making the beginning seem a bit pointless -- even if the only point of the OC was in effect to provide a handle by which the entire AU scenario could be established.Read more... )

*checks on AO3*
There is no separate "Little Men" fandom, as it gets rolled into the general "Little Women Series" category; checking on characters from that fandom who don't appear in any of the earlier books (e.g. Nan, Dan, and Jo's sons Rob and Teddy) suggests that many of the stories that are set within that book don't bother to use the two or three variants on "Little Men" tags that do exist and are mapped to "Little Women", but I'm guessing that there are maybe twenty or so of them out there.
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I note that in Chapter 83 of "Vingt Ans Après", Athos and Aramis find a drawing left by d'Artagnan at Peronne with the sinister message "We are being followed" and, understandably disquieted even though the trail they are following is already cold, proceed to gallop frantically for three or four hours until they encounter the giant boulder moved by Porthos, under which the next message lies. We don't know what time they arrived at Peronne, but since they don't appear to have spent the night there and only discovered d'Artagnan's drawing as they were leaving after a failed search of the town, it can scarcely have been before mid-morning at the earliest, especially since the date is early March and they will not have started travelling until winter daybreak.

After galloping all the way from Peronne, they are obliged to allow their horses three hours' rest, and it takes them a further six hours of riding to reach Compiègne, where they learn that d'Artagnan and Porthos were overtaken and captured. This adds up to a minimum of twelve hours' travel, at the end of which we are told that they dined hastily in order to be able to set out again immediately that night (since Blaisois and Grimaud are left behind with instructions to take the spent horses back to Paris "tomorrow") on hired horses. Even if we assume that they set out at dawn from some nearby hostelry and reached Peronne at 8am or thereabouts, it must have been well and truly dark by this point!

The journey continued further )

Grimaud and Mme de Longueville )
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Since I now have another batch of real quinces (after making japonica jelly last week) I made a recipe from my Russian cookery book -- technically speaking now a Soviet cookery book, I suppose, since it takes it for granted that you will be interested in recipes from all the now independent parts of the Soviet Union!

Azerbaijani bozbash bears a probably not coincidental resemblance to Persian cookery and to lamb plov, Read more... )
(Similar recipe online: https://bestrecipes24.com/recipe/azerbaijani-style-lamb-bozbash-soup-with-chickpeas )


"Little Gentlemen" is coming along quite nicely, although the style is in danger of becoming stilted and verbose -- not very Dumas!
I have now successfully introduced my young OC Venya (playing the 'Nat Blake' role, with Raoul taking on the role -- and vocabulary -- of the cheerful Tommy Bangs who introduces him to everyone and everything) into Athos's house, which is at least fifty per cent of the material envisaged, and am attempting to finish the scene in which Athos reads the accompanying letter (also establishing AU material). Read more... )
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Some stuff I stumbled across when looking for information on what letters in the 1640s actually *looked* like: https://honorandintrigue.blogspot.com/2017/11/early-modern-price-list.html
Note that this is for 1620s France rather than 1640s, but the relative prices at least should give some kind of idea...

Information on letters: https://honorandintrigue.blogspot.com/2016/12/envelopes-and-letters-in-17th-century.html
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I have (finally!) just started upon my crackfic "Little Gentlemen" story (as with my usual crackfic, I envisage a total lack of humour :-p) And while checking on the description of the chateau at Bragelonne, I have just noticed that Athos appears to be in possession of some very unusual trees ;-)

In Chapter 15, we are told that as d'Artagnan approaches the house, he perceives it sur le fond d’un massif d’arbres épais que le printemps poudrait d’une neige de fleurs. Very picturesque, except that, constrained by history, Dumas proceeds to inform us some fifty-five chapters later that, after the passage of a relatively short period of time, the date at that point is January :-p

(But as we already know, consistency in dates is not the author's strong point...)

Edit: I have just noticed that there was likewise a magnificent display of flowers visible from the windows of Athos' dining-room, so at the time of writing Dumas evidently envisaged the scene as taking place later in the year! I don't *think* it can have been the previous autumn, as all the events of the novel (from Athos' arrival in Paris immediately following d'Artagnan's visit and Raoul's departure for Flanders and encounter with Mordaunt along the way, followed by Mordaunt's interview with Mazarin and departure from Boulogne ten days later, followed by King Charles' capture within a week of Athos and Aramis' arrival) seem to have taken place within a remarkable brief timespan...
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Christopher Lee himself on sword-fighting in film (with demonstrations!), and the advantages of working with stuntmen as opposed to actors :-)
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Whie hanging around on hold for an hour I took the opportunity to read some more of the French version of "Twenty Years After", going back afterwards to run a skim-comparison with the online English version I'd read. The differences really are quite considerable, but what gets me are the occasional sections where the translator has not just abridged the text when rendering it into English, but instead added in something that simply doesn't occur in the original.

— Ohé ! qu’est-ce que cela ? "Oho! what’s that?"
— L’Éclair, dit le patron. "The Lightning," answered the captain, "our felucca."
— Nous sommes donc arrivés ? demanda Athos en anglais.

— Nous arrivons, dit le capitaine.
"So far, so good," laughed Athos.


I can see, after a fashion, the point of adding in the extra clarification as to what, exactly, the "Lightning" is, especially as for some reason the preceding allusion to the ship's name had been cut out, so it hasn't been mentioned for a while.
But changing Athos' quiet query into a jolly and out-of-character aphorism that isn't reflected anywhere in the original text (where a large chunk of the content immediately following that exchange is then omitted) just seems *odd*.

Multiple French editions )
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I realised this morning, on coming across a copy of "Jo's Boys", that I couldn't actually *remember* the crackfic idea that I'd had for a crossover of something or other with Jo's school set-up in "Little Men" -- who were the couple I'd vaguely envisioned as filling in for Amy and Laurie as the generous rich relations, and what canon had it been?

Light suddenly dawned again in the middle of my singing practice tonight (concert in a week and a half, alas). It was of course the crackfic idea about Athos' school for gentlemenRead more... )
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Unexpectedly -- presumably due to some change in Cloudflare settings/configuration -- I am apparently now able to view stories and forums on Fanfiction.net again. This isn't as helpful as it might be, since my log-in has long since expired and I still can't negotiate the log-in window ("Please verify you are human") on this browser, but means that I can amongst other things see my *own* stories again!
And see things like this: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14400031/1/Nous-oublierons-ces-bienfaits
Something I didn't know I needed so much in my life: a series of friendship(ish) fics between Tréville and Richelieu!
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I stumbled across the Italian comedy film "Moschettieri del re" by accident (in its Russian dub, under the YouTube title "4 Musketeers are miserable leading a boring peaceful life") and actually enjoyed it a good deal; as a piece of cinema I think this is more successful than the Russian "Return of the Musketeers", and in a not dissimilar vein, being set at about the same period of history and painted with an equally broad brush in terms of fantastic improbability. The fact that as a native English-speaker I was watching it in Russian obviously means that I was missing out on any finer points in the script and wasn't in a position to judge the quality or delivery of the original Italian dialogue in any case, but I thought it worked.
Read more... )
This film doesn't really have a plot -- beyond the opening gambit of "The Musketeers reunite thirty years later" -- but there is a reason for that. Meanwhile it's a series of episodic adventures towards an unknown end, in the spirit of an ongoing serial or soap opera. It has a decent Athos, which is always a selling-point so far as I am concerned, even if he does have a face like Toby Jones :-p The characters are well-defined and remain consistent to the updated versions of themselves that have been established, and I particularly liked the direction in which the older Aramis was developed here. I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did, and even if it wasn't 'real' Russian it was still good practice!

And I was able to understand large chunks of it on first hearing )
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I had vaguely assumed that Athos and Aramis, having arrived in England at the tail-end of the Civil War, had served for several months in the King's army before the final surrender. But in fact the King describes them on that last morning as deux amis de huit jours que je n’oublierai jamais; apparently they have been in England for only about a week (in which case, to be honest, it is very surprising that he places such trust in them -- and astonishing that Aramis, who speaks English but unlike Athos has not lived there, is able to understand what is said to be the Lowland dialect of the sentry with whom he converses :-p)

The letter that Athos sends to d'Artagnan to say that they are in a very bad situation (and that his friend should assume that he is dead if no further word is heard for a space of two and a half months) must therefore have been written almost immediately when they arrived in England, which seems an improbably swift descent into despair; Read more... ) It cannot surely be merely because Mordaunt shouted "See you in England" after their boat as it rowed away?
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Apparently Dumas can't decide on the appearance of the Vicomte de Bragelonne :-p

His characters, where it is mentioned, are all mainly dark-haired, with the notable and probably conscious exception of Milady and her son who are both described as distinctively fairRead more... )

But we are told that d'Artagnan, on observing a rider making a stealthy exit from Athos' home at dawn, reconnut le justaucorps grenat et les cheveux bruns de Raoul, which struck me at the time as being unexpected in a world where practically no-one has plain brown hair... which is why I then noticed with some surprise that when Athos takes him to visit Madame de Chevreuse in Paris, the allusion there is to ses cheveux noirs[...] élégamment partagés comme on les portait à cette époque! However it seemed not implausible that 'cheveux bruns' could simply have been intended to refer to 'dark hair' in general, so I assumed I'd simply misinterpreted the original phrase.

Matters become completely confused, on the other hand, when we reach the epilogue and d'Artagnan refers fondly to the boy as cette chère tête blonde! So I think that all that can be concluded is that Dumas had no very fixed idea in mind and ascribed a random appearance to Raoul at various different points during the construction of his lengthy serial...

(Given that his father is consistently described as dark-haired and his mother fair an intermediate brown would presumably have made sense :-)
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On reading the French version of the earlier chapters (this being the rather tediously lengthy chunk of Fronde activity which the film omits entirely :-p) I noticed somewhat to my embarrassment that d'Artagnan explicitly *does* take Raoul 'home' with him to his lodgings on the rue Tiquetonne after the boy gets mixed up in the rioting, and leaves him shut up there in Madeleine's house for some time in order to keep him out of trouble. Since he does this without a moment's qualm almost immediately after Athos leaves for England, it clearly doesn't make much sense to have him embarrassed subsequently by the mere idea of lodging Raoul beneath his mistress' roof ('what would the Comte de La Fère have thought?')

So I probably need to go more explicitly for my original image, which was the idea that what d'Artagnan considers and rejects is the expedient of having Madeleine 'mother' the bereaved boy on his behalf ("I don't know how to give him what he needs now" -- but a woman's touch possibly might).
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Having been through the stage of finding myself surprisingly pleased with this story, I am now back in the more expected reaction of realising that it doesn't sound much like Porthos after all Read more... )


Think Only This of Me

Athos gave his life to save Charles Stuart. A grieving d’Artagnan must deal with the consequences. And there are some things, at least, that Porthos sees more clearly than any of them.
Porthos and d'Artagnan stand together

The Seigneur de Pierrefonds blew in from the little park at Bragelonne like a great gust of wind and demanded Mouston, who had made himself scarce somewhere in the depths of the house. But since his attendant was for the moment nowhere to be seen and the establishment was shrouded in the dismal air that had driven him out-of-doors in the first place, he caught up a candlestick and went himself in search of d’Artagnan. He had a certain uncomfortable sense that in abandoning the house of mourning he had likewise abandoned his friend, and now that the winter dusk had enforced his return, it was time to relieve d’Artagnan of his duties and stand guard in his place, so to speak, over the young Vicomte Raoul. For even if the Comte de La Fère had bequeathed his ward into d’Artagnan’s care, Porthos had a firm intention that the boy should become his son also.

They had gone together to break the dreadful news. D’Artagnan had not asked for support in that task, but Porthos had been quite certain that he needed it.

And it had been every bit as bad as he had thought. Read more... )

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I spent a happy evening attempting to grab some screen captures of Porthos and d'Artagnan to go with my new fic (since the "Twenty Years After" film conveniently provides footage of the two of them together at Bragelonne, as per my story, although in canon Porthos doesn't ever come there (and hence is implicitly seeing the house for the first time in my AU)... :-p)
http://ivory.ueuo.com/Tower/Albums/Porthos_pics/

This was a rather hit and miss operation, given the hefty shutter delay on screencaps: I did coincidentally grab a halfway decent image of Porthos, Raoul and d'Artagnan at Bragelonne without Athos in shot, although I was actually trying to get a usable picture of Porthos at the time! Low resolution footage )

So after that I went back to the scenes of d'Artagnan and Porthos together at Pierrefonds, and got quite a few decent shots of the two of them together which could potentially be used as an AO3 illustration, and some better vertical format close-ups of Porthos on his own for FFnet. Read more... )

I had forgotten how endearing the morning-after scene is! )

I now need to decide on (probably) one horizontal and one vertical image out of the sixteen. I'm tempted to add the fortuitous Raoul-in-frame pic as a 'happy ending' illustration, although it has to be said that it isn't objectively very good.

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