The Remorse of Others
It was a fine winter’s day; as fine as Gaston de Trélan had thought it might be, when the first red dawn had showed above the walls of the Temple prison on his final journey out to the chateau of Mirabel. Only he lay there now silent and still, and the sun would never warm him again.
It had been very quick; very efficient. The single sharp volley was over in moments. All the same, even before the assembled troops had dispersed, echoes of another kind from the firing squad had begun to run through Paris amid gathering unrest at the news. There were sullen murmurs on street corners against what had been done, and the means by which it had been accomplished... but no whisper of them had reached to the little spinney on the outskirts of the city where a young man had just dismounted, nor come as yet to trouble the ears of that rather disconsolate young gentleman.
A squirrel, busy stripping the first buds from the branches high above, chattered sharply, and the hired mare threw up her head. Roland soothed her with word and touch, and stooped to run a hand cautiously down her foreleg, ashamed of his own lack of attention.( Read more... )
Note to self (because I know from past experience that in ten years' time I shall have forgotten the subtext I was intending to imply!): the dialogue exchanges between Valentine and de Brencourt that Roland does not hear relate to Valentine passing on Gaston's explanation of why he would have *had* to attend the arranged surrender even if he had been certain that his opponents intended to breach the safe-conduct, because failure to do so would have been taken as a refusal to surrender and brought down reprisals upon those he was trying to protect... to which her canon reaction is "I will point out that aspect to the Comte—for he has suffered, Gaston". However, she doesn't have the opportunity or indeed any thought to spare of doing so when next she and de Brencourt meet, so in this story, after her long vigil at Mirabel, when in a calmer state of mind she does as she had said she would in an attempt to ease his mind also. The other message she has to convey to him would be the one entrusted to her in Gaston's final letter (the existence of which Roland is as yet unaware): I ask de Brencourt's pardon once more for what I said to him at La Vergne when he tried to warn me.