igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
Having coming across Apsley Cherry-Garrard's picture pretty much by chance as a mental image for Arctic Raoul (interestingly, apparently he was actually dark-haired; the fair/white beard in the photo was an unexpected side-effect of the extreme cold), I then stumbled across a discarded copy of his autobiographical account of the Antarctic, "The Worst Journey in the World". It's a massive tome about seven hundred pages long (counting a hundred pages or so of historical introduction by both the author and the editor)... and it turns out to be absolutely fascinating.

'Cherry' was intelligent and observant, sometimes palpably schoolboyish and sometimes painfully mature, he had access to all the archive material and personal diaries from the expedition records (he was supposed to be writing up the official report, before he decided he couldn't produce the sort of detached dry document they wanted), and he couldn't half *write*. Read more... )

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igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
I've been reading Apsley Cherry-Garrard (who is an excellent writer, especially given that he basically only produced the one book in his life -- it's like reading those contemporary Everest narratives, and gives a really vivid idea of life on board ship as well: pumping, and engines and coal!), which makes me all the more uneasy about having the d'Artois Expedition face a third winter almost between the lines. I think one solution might be to postpone the Spitzbergen bid until *after* the relief ship fails for a second time, thus giving them Something to Do with those extra months I now have to fill, and making their reaction a little less passive. Setting out in the face of an oncoming winter means more chance of unbroken ice, but much more chance of getting trapped by shortening day length, and no hope of any relief by ship even if they do get through...


After a good deal of dithering, I think I probably shall write the epilogue for Hertha after all. It's going to be yet another juggling job trying not to make Raoul's role too unsympathetic, given that he's not fully engaged.


I planted some marigold seeds in my new 'mini-greenhouse', and they have come up. Although since they are only in about an inch of soil, they will need to be transplanted out of it, and presumably won't do anything much for several months!
igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
The story is not going well — I need to rewrite the wretched 'voyage of the Résurgence' chapter again as a result of having rewritten the end of it and unbalanced the whole thing, and I haven't even attempted the task. And the chapter that ought to be easy going, Raoul and Christine's reunion, is proving very heavy work and I suspect unsatisfactory in similar ways (because I'm doing the same thing, trying to replace writing an action sequence — in this case Christine's adventures in the mountains after escaping Erik — by a brief in-text summary from the character).

On the other hand, I have a face-claim for Arctic Raoul, beard, frostbite, rag-tag clothing and all :-)
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