Ready to go...
12 August 2015 06:15 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
igenlodeRight, I've written an extra paragraph to cover Philippe's boyhood with his mother, added in material to cover Chagny de La Roche and Philippe's non-recognition of Christine at the Opera (thank goodness for margins... but a pity both of those fell on the same page!) and tried to clarify the ending better. I have a title — The Sons of Éléonore — and half a summary ("Éléonore de Chagny was always closest to her eldest son Philippe. But her death left him with an infant brother and a family in ruins...")
The summary needs more work: I think the theme of the story, so far as it emerges, is of Philippe gradually learning to love his brother and then further managing to accept his choice (and then dying; oops!) But otherwise we're pretty much clear to go to typescript :-)
The summary needs more work: I think the theme of the story, so far as it emerges, is of Philippe gradually learning to love his brother and then further managing to accept his choice (and then dying; oops!) But otherwise we're pretty much clear to go to typescript :-)
