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I have actually been doing some typing on Ch13 of Hertha, trying to fix the horrifyingly paralysing issue of the gunshot in the flashback, the prospect of tackling which had kept me from so much as touching the manuscript for six months; I've succeeded in introducing a couple more allusions to the sound of the shot and pushed more bits of Hertha's narrative into the grammatically less ambiguous past-perfect tense as a result, which I think has *probably* patched the perceived problem sufficiently, although I shall need to run the result past somebody to check (probably [personal profile] meibruges again!) However, I have perhaps inevitably ended up starting work on this past midnight every day, due to chronic procrastination -- the only reason why I have got round to it at all, really, is that I have now reached a stage where all the *other* tasks queued up are those that feel even less inviting, so that this now becomes an escape mechanism rather than a thing to be escaped.

(It currently looks as if Ch13 is going to come out at around 6,000 words, which is a lot, but not actually any more than the existing Chapter 7 and Ch4...)

Chapter lengths:
Ch1: "Can it be Christine?"3551
Ch2: "We Can Make it Work"4754
Ch3: "As if Awoken from a Dream"3914
Ch4: "She Won't Thank You For It"6078
Ch5: "An Accident... Simply an Accident"4480
Ch6: "He'll Stop at Nothing"5402
Ch7: "It Will Be At Midsummer"6061
Ch8: "Why So Silent, Good Messieurs?"5105
Ch9: "Well-Beloved Wife"4242
Ch10: "Wishing You Were Somehow Here Again"3616
Ch11: "You Betrayed Me"4845
Ch12: "I Need to See the End"3502

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