I think I'm now fairly definitely embarked upon Chapter 4 of "An Outsider and a Foreigner" (though I'm not entirely satisfied with the end of Chapter 3, where I never really found an effective form of words for the final sentence).
( Il Muto timeline issues )
Chapter 4 so far has ended up being about musical-Christine's backstory and her parents; what I haven't worked out is where Raoul fits into all this in terms of the characters' mutual chronology. I wish I were happier with this story as a whole.
( Problems with handling Raoul )
( More beta-reading of Arctic Raoul )
( Il Muto timeline issues )
Chapter 4 so far has ended up being about musical-Christine's backstory and her parents; what I haven't worked out is where Raoul fits into all this in terms of the characters' mutual chronology. I wish I were happier with this story as a whole.
( Problems with handling Raoul )
( More beta-reading of Arctic Raoul )