2021-01-27

igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
2021-01-27 05:52 pm

"Il Muto" timescale and fic progress

I think I'm now fairly definitely embarked upon Chapter 4 of "An Outsider and a Foreigner" (though I'm not entirely satisfied with the end of Chapter 3, where I never really found an effective form of words for the final sentence).
Il Muto timeline issues )

Chapter 4 so far has ended up being about musical-Christine's backstory and her parents; what I haven't worked out is where Raoul fits into all this in terms of the characters' mutual chronology. I wish I were happier with this story as a whole.
Problems with handling Raoul )



More beta-reading of Arctic Raoul )