Fic progress

Making final edits on the 'long' version of "Afterwards". It's hard to remember that I need to copy any important changes back into the abridged version, since that's the one that's going to get judged! (Like the couple of Christmas date references that I intended to use but couldn't originally find any way to work in.)

The long version currently pans out at about 5400 words as versus 3800, although I retained some of the cuts on the grounds that they were actually an improvement.