DrabbleWriMo 29: Surprise
29 November 2021 01:31 pmA last-minute (surprise!) change of plan; in order to reduce the 'disjointed' effect, we omit the entire episode of the fake escort which turns out to be a real one, and cut to the aftermath. Which means that Gaston only gets a single PoV chapter overall, I think (Absent). Again, probably symptomatic of the shifted focus throughout -- the vast majority of the chapters are either de Brencourt or Valentine.
It does work well with my expressed desire to do more of de Brencourt's PoV for the bits the author only implies in retrospect and in passing, though. I'm pretty pleased with how much of the latter I've managed to cover, as things have turned out; it brings the result closer to actual fan-fiction rather than an exercise in summary/retelling.
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I'm sorry to have left out so much of Roland; from a genuine fan-fiction point of view, I can't help wondering where he did go on that final morning, when we learn only that he is out and fails to return before the end of the novel, and more importantly what on earth his reactions must have been when he did arrive back to discover that his world has fallen about his ears in his absence (and to learn it at the hands of the Comte de Brencourt, when there has never been much liking lost between them)...
( Hyde de Neuville )
It does work well with my expressed desire to do more of de Brencourt's PoV for the bits the author only implies in retrospect and in passing, though. I'm pretty pleased with how much of the latter I've managed to cover, as things have turned out; it brings the result closer to actual fan-fiction rather than an exercise in summary/retelling.
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I'm sorry to have left out so much of Roland; from a genuine fan-fiction point of view, I can't help wondering where he did go on that final morning, when we learn only that he is out and fails to return before the end of the novel, and more importantly what on earth his reactions must have been when he did arrive back to discover that his world has fallen about his ears in his absence (and to learn it at the hands of the Comte de Brencourt, when there has never been much liking lost between them)...
( Hyde de Neuville )