I haven't noticed the POTO fanfiction dying down much, but then I've spent the last year working on Nautical Raoul (a.k.a. the Swedish story), and like most people I tend to read and review more when I'm posting myself... I've noticed that there have been more short 'from a Tumblr prompt' stories and fewer 'modern teenager falls through a time-rift and gets mixed up with Erik' retellings, and more non-canon pairings (e.g. Christine with Carlotta or with the Daroga!) though I really cannot see the point of writing a story where Raoul runs off to America in a slash relationship with your OC. At that point, it's basically not Raoul on a pretty fundamental level, and all you've got is your idea of a sweet and vulnerable Ideal Boyfriend in your idea of homosexuality for girls...
I did rather gather that you had moved into other fandoms :-p But then you seemed to have stopped writing altogether... and I never did watch the "Star Wars" sequel, or the stand-alone "Rogue One", so I was still busy avoiding spoilers.
I don't know enough about 19th century French politics to start including crypto-royalist conspiracies into my fiction, I'm afraid (which is to say I've never read any novels dealing with the subject: most of my history and geography comes from stories!)-- that's what's refreshing about coming across the occasional story where you get the feeling that the author is actually aware of a wider world out there, rather than putting her own life-view into a poor carbon-copy of all her favourite fanfiction clichés of what 'The Past' was like. (Servants, corsets and horses all tend to be deeply unbelievable...)
I rewatched the middle of the film with much greater attention and foreknowledge (and with the subtitles switched on,so I could see precisely who was supposedly saying what!), having already had to rewatch the end for Alan's story and the beginning for Thomas's ;-p And I can confirm that I did get the details of Edith's discoveries right from my memories: she discovers three envelopes in Enola's trunk, all labelled in the same handwriting (I assumed it to be Enola's, but it would be a nasty twist if it were, in fact, Lucille's -- but then why would she hide all three amongst the possessions of the latest wife, instead of in the relevant cases?), plus a wax cylinder player to match the cylinders she has already found. When Edith listens to the recordings, the first speaker introduces herself as Pamela Upton, who has apparently just acquired the device and is testing it with her beloved husband (I also checked the dates on Pamela's briefly-glimpsed marriage certificate: she was thirty-four, he was twenty!) Then the speaker on the second recording Edith tries says that she is being poisoned and is going to hide the cylinders as evidence -- it hadn't occurred to me that this might also be Pamela with a voice changed and hoarse from coughing, but in fact it clearly isn't, because she goes on to talk about not wanting to die so very far from home and wanting her body taken back. (And the subtitles prove this by stating clearly that it *is* Enola speaking.)
I'm guessing that Enola also assembled and hid the envelopes as evidence, although it might have made more sense to leave the machine to play the recordings together with the cylinders :-p
We don't find out what the other recordings contained, as Edith understandably bolts at this point. (Fanfic possibilities? ;-) I assume by analogy they were recordings of the other wives, but maybe they weren't; maybe they were all Pamela's, and Enola simply discovered the machine and added her own testimony at the end. That would be marginally more plausible... although, as you said, Lucille does keep mementoes of her victims, and she might have deliberately got each new wife to record her voice together with Thomas 'for posterity'. Probably not, because she makes no attempt to record Edith, while she does take her hair. But then maybe she didn't know where the blank cylinders had got to :-p
Somebody obviously did keep the photos from each marriage (and Margaret's marriage certificate). Obviously they would have had to have been cleared out of sight before a new wife was brought in, and from the way Lucille reacts when she realises Edith has found and opened Enola's trunk it's possible that it was she who put them in there... Either that, or she simply realises that the existence of a prior wife whom nobody ever mentioned and whose possessions have been thrown in the cellar is in itself going to look highly suspicious!
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Date: 2018-12-07 12:45 am (UTC)I did rather gather that you had moved into other fandoms :-p
But then you seemed to have stopped writing altogether... and I never did watch the "Star Wars" sequel, or the stand-alone "Rogue One", so I was still busy avoiding spoilers.
I don't know enough about 19th century French politics to start including crypto-royalist conspiracies into my fiction, I'm afraid (which is to say I've never read any novels dealing with the subject: most of my history and geography comes from stories!)-- that's what's refreshing about coming across the occasional story where you get the feeling that the author is actually aware of a wider world out there, rather than putting her own life-view into a poor carbon-copy of all her favourite fanfiction clichés of what 'The Past' was like. (Servants, corsets and horses all tend to be deeply unbelievable...)
I rewatched the middle of the film with much greater attention and foreknowledge (and with the subtitles switched on,so I could see precisely who was supposedly saying what!), having already had to rewatch the end for Alan's story and the beginning for Thomas's ;-p
And I can confirm that I did get the details of Edith's discoveries right from my memories: she discovers three envelopes in Enola's trunk, all labelled in the same handwriting (I assumed it to be Enola's, but it would be a nasty twist if it were, in fact, Lucille's -- but then why would she hide all three amongst the possessions of the latest wife, instead of in the relevant cases?), plus a wax cylinder player to match the cylinders she has already found.
When Edith listens to the recordings, the first speaker introduces herself as Pamela Upton, who has apparently just acquired the device and is testing it with her beloved husband (I also checked the dates on Pamela's briefly-glimpsed marriage certificate: she was thirty-four, he was twenty!) Then the speaker on the second recording Edith tries says that she is being poisoned and is going to hide the cylinders as evidence -- it hadn't occurred to me that this might also be Pamela with a voice changed and hoarse from coughing, but in fact it clearly isn't, because she goes on to talk about not wanting to die so very far from home and wanting her body taken back. (And the subtitles prove this by stating clearly that it *is* Enola speaking.)
I'm guessing that Enola also assembled and hid the envelopes as evidence, although it might have made more sense to leave the machine to play the recordings together with the cylinders :-p
We don't find out what the other recordings contained, as Edith understandably bolts at this point. (Fanfic possibilities? ;-) I assume by analogy they were recordings of the other wives, but maybe they weren't; maybe they were all Pamela's, and Enola simply discovered the machine and added her own testimony at the end. That would be marginally more plausible... although, as you said, Lucille does keep mementoes of her victims, and she might have deliberately got each new wife to record her voice together with Thomas 'for posterity'.
Probably not, because she makes no attempt to record Edith, while she does take her hair. But then maybe she didn't know where the blank cylinders had got to :-p
Somebody obviously did keep the photos from each marriage (and Margaret's marriage certificate). Obviously they would have had to have been cleared out of sight before a new wife was brought in, and from the way Lucille reacts when she realises Edith has found and opened Enola's trunk it's possible that it was she who put them in there... Either that, or she simply realises that the existence of a prior wife whom nobody ever mentioned and whose possessions have been thrown in the cellar is in itself going to look highly suspicious!