Plot holes

Well, I've written chapter three (another 3000 words), which came out considerably more violent than I'd originally intended/remembered (and only actually covers about half of the plot summary for point three; the second half will probably fit into the succeeding chapter, though). I spent some time wondering how (a) I was actually going to get Raoul out of this safely and (b) how I was going to avoid Philippe finding out about what was going on. Then it dawned on me that maybe Philippe finding out might be the solution...( Read more... )