Well, she may hate R/C but at least they are together here (a positive side of many Erik/OC fics).
Strapless red dress and make-up? I think even a saloon girl would tell her to dial it down a bit... And does the color red really bring out green eyes?
Erik didn't make a new outfit for the Ball for himself? Now that's what I call lazy.
"Leave him hanging" does sound very awkward in any story with Erik in it. :D
Her repeating Erik's name in brackets after every mention of the Phantom reminds me of the audience participation screenings of Rocky Horror, where audience screams "Asshole!" and "Slut" every time Brad and Janet appear.
"angry rage"???
Statue of an angle in the XIX century? I bet the sculptor was a true visionary.
This Mary Sue is basically "Christine but cooler". Bleh. I prefer more original ones.
The typos are so consistent I'm starting to suspect it's a rather subtle parody. Or the author is very young and really bad at English.
It's probably Gerik so no smelly skeletal hands here. :D
I feel bad for blonde cheerleaders now. :(
"Christine is shown as soft and sweet and apparently worried about Erik" And she even calls him "angel"! (Sorry, "angle".) Which I hate but it's a very common thing in fanfics.
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Strapless red dress and make-up? I think even a saloon girl would tell her to dial it down a bit... And does the color red really bring out green eyes?
Erik didn't make a new outfit for the Ball for himself? Now that's what I call lazy.
"Leave him hanging" does sound very awkward in any story with Erik in it. :D
Her repeating Erik's name in brackets after every mention of the Phantom reminds me of the audience participation screenings of Rocky Horror, where audience screams "Asshole!" and "Slut" every time Brad and Janet appear.
"angry rage"???
Statue of an angle in the XIX century? I bet the sculptor was a true visionary.
This Mary Sue is basically "Christine but cooler". Bleh. I prefer more original ones.
The typos are so consistent I'm starting to suspect it's a rather subtle parody. Or the author is very young and really bad at English.
It's probably Gerik so no smelly skeletal hands here. :D
I feel bad for blonde cheerleaders now. :(
"Christine is shown as soft and sweet and apparently worried about Erik" And she even calls him "angel"! (Sorry, "angle".) Which I hate but it's a very common thing in fanfics.