igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
2024-07-28 11:35 pm
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Translating 18th century prose

Having stumbled across the Wikipedia page for Thomas Cromwell's nephew out of mild curiosity as to how he acquired the surname 'Cromwell' despite being descended from the sister of Henry VIII's minister, I ended up spending eight hours or so in 'translating' virtually the entire page into 20th-century English prose out of the original text by an 18th-century antiquarian, which had been cut and pasted virtually verbatim to create the initial article. (I do not aspire to 21st-century prose: 'glow-up', 'call out' and 'problematic' are not in my vocabulary :-p)

Original 'untranslated' version

We shall see how much of it survives; I ended up having to do a good deal of research in order to check the validity of the various references I was trying to repurpose, and found at least two apparent errors in the original in the process. I also now know a great deal more about the said nephew than I did previously, my prior acquaintance being limited to the background of "Wolf Hall" -- but I am *not* an expert of any kind on the era, and limited myself to the existing sources already cited in the article.
igenlode: The pirate sloop 'Horizon' from "Treasures of the Indies" (Default)
2009-02-03 12:14 am
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No Business like Snow Business

What larks! What jinks! What fun and games!

Snow over the South of England, and the whole world comes to a halt -- adults out playing in the parks, London mired to its hubcaps, drifts in Kent. No trains, no schools, no work.

The local park was full of ten-foot snowmen like an invasion from Phobos... plus one Easter Island head from a particularly artistic contributor. I put on two of everything (and three pairs of socks, as I couldn't find any Wellingtons small enough to fit) and spent an hour or two tramping round with a steady swing, making the deliveries I'd so foolishly put off the day before; cycling, alas, was out of the question. Hard work, but good exercise, like trotting racehorses over sand... By the time I came back, the whole front of my overcoat was plastered with a shell of snow, as was my scarf -- the snow on my hat, worryingly, had melted. Clearly I need some better 'loft insulation'; perhaps I should postpone that haircut after all!

I am, in any case, feeling remarkably pleased with myself. I have successfully mended a cracked wire in a moulded-on plug, and got the plug casing back on afterwards. I have contributed an entire page to Wikipedia -- at any rate, it's still there 24 hours later, so presumably isn't about to be reverted as unsuitable. And I've discovered that I'm apparently not the only person who actually liked Sonnie Hale, which is always reassuring.

Sonnie Hale

I've been doing a good deal of research into Sonnie Hale in the last couple of weeks, and have vaguely-formed plans to turn some of what I've written into a web page; I might post something here too perhaps...