I hope you do figure out a plot and write it someday. :)
Oh, I never saw that... Unfortunately as it stands it looks like standard Mary Sue material or a parody thereof, with no sign of the caped crusader :-(
That's because I haven't written the next three chapters yet.
Chapter 2: Lilith wakes up in the lair and meets Erik and her fellow Sues. Chapter 3: Raoul arrives at the opera house, witnesses the trouble the Sues are causing, and decides to do something about it. Chapter 4: The caped-crusading starts up.
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Oh, I never saw that... Unfortunately as it stands it looks like standard Mary Sue material or a parody thereof, with no sign of the caped crusader :-(
That's because I haven't written the next three chapters yet.
Chapter 2: Lilith wakes up in the lair and meets Erik and her fellow Sues.
Chapter 3: Raoul arrives at the opera house, witnesses the trouble the Sues are causing, and decides to do something about it.
Chapter 4: The caped-crusading starts up.
Ouch, that review! Is it for real, or did you leave it yourself as a further parody? It's so much of a cliché as to be barely believable...
It wasn't me! I don't know whether the reviewer was being sincere or got the joke and decided to play along.